Peer-Editing Worksheet 1
Chapter 1: Paragraph Format
Peer Editor: Juan López Pérez-Castejón Date: 20/10/2020
1. Yes.
Already familiar.
She says sometimes the friends we make online are fake, I find it interesting because my friends and I have met plenty of people online, and we consider them more real than some people we meet in real life.
2. No.
All in all, I have looked for it and discovered that this means “considering everything”.
3. 6.
No.
4. I think all is absolutely correct.
5. It seems to be very organised, the punctuation is perfect, and the ideas she wants to express are all clear.
Chapter 2: Paragraph Structure
3. Phone manner: How phones affect our lives
4. 4.
I think so.
5. No.
6. So, all in all, phones have taken over our lives but it’s up to us to decide whether we want it to have good impact or a bad one in us.
Nowadays cellphones have taken over our lives and the way we relate with the rest of the world. These relationships sometimes are affected on a positive way and, other times, in a negative one. As for the positive ways, we usually find ourselves making friends quicker or even improving our relationship with the ones we already got. On the other hand, we usually end up ignoring our friends when we are on the same room as them and sometimes the friends we make online are fake. An example to support the positive ways in which phones have affected my own relationships is the good friendship I've got with my new friends from university. So, all in all, phones have taken over our lives but it's up to us to decide whether we want it to have a good impact or a bad one in us.
Self-Editing Worksheet 3
Chapter 3: Narrative Paragraph
Writer: Juan López Pérez-Castejón Date: 20/10/2020
Format
Yes
Content and Organization
No
No
Punctuation, Capitalization, and Spelling
Yes
Yes
Yes
Yes
Yes
Grammar and Sentence Structure
4, Yes
Yes
Yes
Personal Grammar Trouble Spots
None
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